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WELP. HERE WE GO.
The name Selokashi sounds very unique. Never seen that before.
A soldier that's taken millions of lives with a blade and still hasn't adapted to it? Another first. But at the same time it's kind of believable. No humane person will be able to get used to killing, no matter how many times they do it. People that get used to it are changed beyond recovery at that point.
"74 years" O>O HOW OLD IS THIS DUDE?
"One victim was found with their throats literally torn out and their head rolling
off to one side. " HOLY TISH.
"Based on these findings, it’s safe to say that whoever killed my parents and the people at that gas station was a trained professional who knew what they were doing." A couple extra spaces in that line. And you did a good job of hooking the reader here. That part is very interesting.
"Madeline and my uncle had one child and named him Paris. Paris was born January 25th, 2000" Extra space in that line, and weren't "YOU" born in 2000? Is this a date error?
"He taught us how to fight using martial arts, including everything from Tae Kwan Do to Judo to Okinawa martial arts" Extra space there.
That was a VERY good prologue.
Thanks bro! Things will be picking up in Chapter 3. Chapter 1 is the longest so far, but it sets everything up.